Tuesday, 31 July 2012

Blog the second - the day draws nearer

Today we tried more writing;  my 'My Story'.  Each girl chose a symbol for the memory on her timeline, a colour, some dialogue, and then she drew a picture of it.  I read them an extract from ''Tis" by Frank McCourt, the part where mother manages to get hold of a bed from the St vincent de Paul Society.  Then they wrote. 

I think that they should work in groups tomorrow and do some editing.  this writing has made me think about how to correct the work; how to perfect it.  It needs reworking, not for me to mark and then smash on to the next exciting episode. 

This is the area that I must concentrate on.  Otherwise we do isolated exercises that are often forgotten.  I need to find a way to develop better writing skills that will endure!

The reading works.  They enjoy it, but how to translate this into fostering better writing techniques. 

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